For starters I'm gonna be sharing to you what my story about, so my Story is about a girl who currently have a rare i colour on her left eye of which she got from her mom and a Celeste eye colour on her right eye; which is very rare in humans to had a two different eye colours. She always got bullied because of her left eye, but her friend is always there for her and defend her. It started when she was 8 years old, she didn't told anyone about it then, but it got really worse over the years so she told about it to her only friend that never left her alone since then, her friend got really worried about her so even though she got bullied she also helped people that also got bullied. One they she and her friend were wondering around there school garden ("Which is the garden that looked like an old forest cause it's to big") They both heard a scream saying "HELP" loudly and weakly, they tried to go there as fast as they could they found a girl getting bullied but it was not just any kind of bullied that student's do in school, they were beating her up to death and the girl was about to passed our her friend found a stick to sway on one of the bullied and distracted them for the girl and Hikari to run out of there but instead Hikari went back and help him with the bullies and told about it to the principal and got expelled, the people who bullied her didn't even bothered to bullied her anymore since they were scared to get expelled.She lived her life peacefully and had a nice life at the end.
Here are my progress so far
Kamusta Kristille!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about the plot of your comic strip, you have lots of nice ideas. I look forward to seeing your story come together with your drawings. Maybe next time you could take the photos closer up so we can really see the details in your art work!
- Miss Birtch