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Sunday, May 10, 2020

Working from home-Narrative writing- blockbuster movie

Today I'm doing the narrative writing that we have in task, I choose the Fantasy one but i did it with action.So here's what I've been working on.

Topic: Fantasy and Action
*Fantasy*
  • Magic: the power of apparently influencing events by using mysterious or supernatural forces.

  • Spell: A spell is kinda like a Magic but Spell's are such as like using a spell summon a Winter dragon.

  • Mythical: Myth is a Thing or a creature that you can found in story book's such us Fairy's, Phoenix, dragon etc.  

*Action*

  • Brave: Being fearless,  courageous, plucky, valiant, valorous,intrepid, heroic,lionhearted, manful, macho, bold, daring, daredevil, adventurous, audacious,

  • Villain: A villain is a bad guy's who always do wrong thing's.

  • Explore: Explore are you go somewhere you like and wonder around in there and found new things.
Characters-
-Tsuchi
-Weadow
-Liam
This is the characters in my story





Setting's-
Setting number one-
Castle and Village
Setting number two-
Forest

Story-Runnaway Princesses
August 21 1986, Weadow was wondering outside the castle on the forest when she met Liam and Tsuchi that day, Weadow was only 5 while Liam and Tsuchi is a year older than her, they were 6 that time. Weadow's mother the Queen was still alive back then, but one a month later someone poisoned her mum and until now no one know's who killed her mother. Then her father became abusive towards her,she knew her father hated her in the first place but she never told her mum cause she don't want her to worry.

12 years later   
"WEADOW GET YOUR BUTT IN HERE!?!" her father shouted!.
ALRIGHT COMING~! Weadow replied..
What does he want in 6 in the morning!?!?!" She thought..
A few moment's later after she changed, she went down stair's to her dad.
What is it "Father" she murmured.
We have to visit an old friend of mine cause we have to talk about something. Her father said
Now go wear something nice like a proper princess would wear! Not like a tomboy wearing  a hoodie and a jeans!. He added.

She was always treated like this by her father and even got beaten her up if she won't listen. But she was used to it now.
After they arrived to her father's friend who is also a King, and that's the moment she realize that her one childhood friend which is Tsuchi is the Daughter of her father's friend. But what Weadow didn't know that her mother also died in the same problem *She was poisoned* And for a little while when they were alone Tsuchi told her everything that happened to her mother. Weadow was shocked and that it happened to her mum too. After that they been silent for 1 minute when his dad came to there room and told her they need to go back to the Castle.
Weadow said bye to Tsuchi before heading out.
A Few day's after that thing's haven't change..
One day later Weadow had enough and try to escape from the Castle so she made a plan in her secret room where no one knows but only her mother, friends and her. Her plan was to escape at night where everyone is asleep but while she was doing the plan Liam came to there secret room and saw her plan!. 

"What are you doing in here!?!?!" Weadow wondered
"Hey chill i know your planing to escape from the Castle so i decided to join you" He said
"And i invited someone who also wanna join" he added
Hello Girl! Tsuchi said
Tsuchi what are you doing here!?!?! She said
"Same thing what you were doing right now" She said to weadow with giggle.
Alright! lets get into it! weadow said.

After whole day night of working on the plan, Tsuchi ask her father is she can stay the night with Weadow and Surprisingly he accepted cause he haven't let Tsuchi stay in someone's house before or someone's Castle..So that night they packed all the stuff they needed on the escape plan, so they went to the village and get some things like Disguise hoodies, Glasses, and some contact lenses and wig's.
After a week of getting ready and planning they finally finished it and they already have everything they need.

AT MONDAY NIGHT

They planned to do the escape plan on Monday night so no one will notice since there father were busy with there thing with the other kingdom's. Weadow and Tsuchi waited for liam to get his stuff from his house and at 12:00 in the midnight there going out. For the past few hours of wait It's finally 12:00 in the midnight.

"This is our chance to escape!" Weadow murmured...
"Alright lets go" Liam said

They went trough the back door of there secret room and outside that door is the forest that they only know. They sneak out so no one will notice after a few miles away from the castle they ran to the village in a mall where they can wear there disguise so no one can recognize them....

"Alright guys what now that we escaped?" Liam ask
"We have to make our own house in the forest so one can see us" Weadow suggested 
But aren't that gonna be a big suspicious though? Tsuchi said
"I mean we do have our disguise but they will be more suspicious if we live in the forest" Tsuchi added
"Don't worry i know know a place that i only know" Liam said
"Then where is it??" Weadow ask in excitement 
"I think i know what your gonna say" Tsuchi said
" The Earth" Tsuchi and Liam both said
" The Earth!?!? weadow said with shocked  
"Yes the Earth and i know how to get there" Liam said
"Alright then?" weadow said
"But first we need to wait for the full moon and it's on next few days" He added
"The full moon!? but i can't control my self on full moon!?!" weadow said anxiously.
"We have no choice, beside were here for you we won't let you lose you self!" Tsuchi said to weadow.

For the past few days they've been waiting for the portal to the Earth open. But what they didn't know is anyone part of the moon family can open the portal with just singing a song!?

FULL MOON  
"Look's like it's time..." Liam said
"Wish us luck" Tsuchi said 
"Let's go" Weadow said
"ARGHHHHHHH MY HEAD HURTS!?!?!!?" Weadow shouted!
"Shoot! Tsuchi hold her!" Liam shouted
"How!?!? I can't hold her she's gonna trow me in the air!" Tsuchi said
"Just Do it! damn it!" Liam shouted at her
"Alright!" Tsuchi said

Liam hold her hand so she can't hurt them with her Long claws

"I WAN'T BLOOD!!" Weadow shouted!
"She's a vampire!?" Tsuchi said
" Yes, But not just any Vampire she's a thribrid! she's mixed Vampire, Alpha wolf and a demon" Liam said
" How come she didn't told us!?! i mean me!?" Tsuchi said
"Probably cause she don't want us to worry?" Liam said

Liam let her Drink his blood since they don't have any choice but that.

"What the hell are you doing!"Tsuchi said
"Letting her drink my blood?" Liam said
"Come on drink it" liam said to Weadow
" No! I won't! it might kill you!?" Weadow said
"No i insist Don't worry about me.."Liam said
"Are you sure!?"Weadow said
" yes now do it!" he said
" Alright, ready" Weadow said

After she drank Liam's blood she passed out and went back to normal. Liam carried Weadow to the portal through earth. When they got to earth they went to his house. After a few day's they planned to go to a school cause there still to young to work.They enrolled to this school called Moon academy
Where unusual student's go.They still have a week before school start, they used there human form so no one can see them looking like a creature from another universe.
 SCHOOL DAY   
"This is it our first day on our first school" Weadow said
"Alright lets go in"Tsuchi said 
AFTER 8 MONTHS
They've been to school for almost 8 months now and they already forgot about the Castle and the King's, Liam also thought them how to fight for self-defense just incase. They have alot of fun on Earth while the people in the Kingdom is in Chaos bucause of there father killing people if they won't tell them where Tsuchi and Weadow were. But one day There Father found out where they are and Attacked them, But Luckily all that practice paid off cause they defeated them. They went back to the Castle and re-built the houses that there Father's ruined and they give the thrown to the right people and left back to the Human world and live happily ever after!.

~Thank you for reading~ 
~hope you enjoy reading it!~


Hope you like i know some of it don't make sense cause i made this late at night...


2 comments:

  1. Wow Kristille, This is an inspired piece of writing. There are lots of twist and turns in your story that I enjoy. We discover more about your characters as we read the story. For example, Weadow's trilbrid identity creates problems during the escape at full moon. The reader assumes that Liam recovers but he may also live in some altered state or become a trilbrid too. You have set yourself up well for a sequel. They could have lots of adventures at school or the story of the defeat of the Father on Earth could be exciting to read also. :)

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    1. Thank you so much for a positive comment Mr.Collins!. I might actually make a story about this at Wattpad, but other than that thank you for your time reading this

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