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Thursday, December 10, 2020

Hur 4- Writing A story

 Hello people! I will blog about This term's Hur 4 writing. For the whole term everyone was working on their own original story and of course I was one of those people. And Because of that I will be sharing you the story I was working on, It's not quite finished yet but hopefully you enjoy it! 

Story Plot:

The story is about a girl and a boy who went on an adventure to find the tree gems to find out the truth behind all the prophecy. While they were on their adventure for the first gem, Hinata got kidnapped by the villains and Kageyama was on his way to find her but something unexpected happened.


The Hidden forest

Cold windy afternoon. A girl staring at the dark foggy forest,

at first she thought there was something weird about the forest

so she tried to go there and find out what it was about, but

she stopped. She heard someone’s voice and said, “No! Don’t go

anywhere near that forest!” She looked back and saw- “GASHP”

Hinata was shocked, “That was just a dream..” Hinata thought.

“I should probably go get ready now for school..” she added. 


While walking to school she kept thinking about that weird dream

she had last night. She arrived at school earlier than she

expected, she would always come to school late but this time she

was not.


She went to her class early because she didn't really have

friends

to go hangout with or talk to before the bell because for her

opinion no one really liked her and she thought that people think

she was weird so no one talked to her. 


While walking into her class she bumped into someone.


“I'm sorry” she said “It’s fine” The person said, She looked up

and saw the guy she bumped into, she got really embarrassed and

just walked straight into the classroom. 


But besides that she had these really strange feelings about that

guy's aura, he seems unhuman… “Or maybe I was just overthinking,”

she thought. 


She finished her first class and went to the next one. 


She entered the class and saw the same guy she bumped into

earlier, “It’s that guy..” She said. 


She sat down on her seat and started writing down some notes of

what the teacher was saying, Then she started to feel that aura

again, she can’t

explain what it is, but it’s really weird because this was the

first time she ever felt those weird feelings that give her

shivers.


The guy asked if he could go to the washroom to the teacher,


“Huh..” She wondered “Why does every time I feel this weird aura

coming out of him, he always tries to go out, like he's trying

to avoid something from happening or something..” she added. 


At lunch Hinata headed to the library for some research, she

looked through books and found something unusual, the book was

called “The truth behind the Hidden Forest” She took the book and

borrowed it from the library.

When she got home she started the research, she opened the book

and found a picture of the forest, “I think I’ve been to this

place before..but I don’t exactly know when..” She said,

“Weird” she added, While passing through the pages she saw a

location where you can find the three gems to open the door to

the Hidden Forest, it said “This task will require two people,

to open the door you have to find three gems. The first one

you will be only able to find in a dark cave in the Cryptic Forest,

you will need equipment and those are a rope, flashlights, shovel

to dig out the gem and lastly a person who can guard you while

digging out.”


“Why would you need a guard to guard you while digging?” she

wondered. 


“For the next gem you can find it in the same forest but not the

same cave” she continued “You will be able to find it beside a

river. 

There you will find a big rock that has a carving of a mystic

flower. 

Go to it and say these words with your eyes closed

Noctu Orfei Aude Fraetor” Once you said these words you’ll need to back

out and wait for something to happen, You will be able to find

out what will happen if you went there yourself.” 

“Interesting” Hinata said “Next page let’s see..” She added 


“For the third gem you will be able to find it in-” 


“It’s ripped?” She wondered.


 Hinata lay down to her bed and slept for the day. The next day

she went to her class as usual without any problem.


At her class she saw the same guy she saw yesterday, but this

time she never felt that aura she felt yesterday,so she approached

him and said “Hi! Are you new here?” 


“Yes..I am..” he answered in a quiet voice.


 “Would you like to hangout with me in the library later?” Hinata

asked 


“Sure, I’m going there later anyways..so I guess I can.” he

replied. 


They both had two more classes together before they separated

from each other to go to different classes. 


It is now break time and Hinata went straight to the library,

while walking Hinata saw Kageyama standing in front of the library

waiting for her. 


She went close to him and said “Let’s go inside” they both went

inside the library and started finding books they wanted to find

for research purposes.


 “What are you trying to find?” Hinata asked “There’s this book

that I really need to find to go back” he replied “Go back where?”

she asked “Nothing, ignore what I just said” he added.


 “What was the book called anyways?” Hinata asked “The truth

behind the Hidden Forest” he replied “Ohh! I have that book” she

said “But for some reason the last pages had been ripped..” “Ohh no..”

he said “Why??” Hinata asked “We better get ready” Kageyama added

with frustration.


 “B-but w-why?” Hinata asked with a nervous voice “Come with me,

we're gonna skip school” he added “W-why!? And where are we

going!?” Hinata asked “Just come with me and we better hurry or

else” Kageyama answered “Bu-” “No but's, just come with me”

Kageyama added.


 Kageyama grabbed her hands and walked off the school, skipping

the rest of the class.


 Hinata actually got really scared what would happen if she

skips because that was her first time skipping school

but at the same time she’s kinda relieved that she was skipping

for the rest of the day. 


She was still a little worried about where they were about to go,

but when they got there she was shocked. 


“What are we doing in my house?” Hinata asked in shock, that he

knew where she lived. “Go get your stuff and we will leave right

now” Kageyama replied “Get the book and put all the things you

need in a bag” he added.


Hinata went inside her house in confusion, she took the biggest

bag she had and put all the things that were listed in the book,

that also includes the book. 


She went back outside only to find Kageyama all ready and changed. 


“Wow..b-but how?” Hinata was shocked “What?” “How the hell did you

go back to your house in that short amount of time!?” She was

shocked. 


“I have been only inside the house for 5 minutes!?” “Oh. that” He

looked at her and murmured “I can’t tell you” “Wait- Imma go back

inside and change” She dropped the bag she was holding on the

floor and ran towards inside “We don’t have time for that!” He

yelled “But- I SMELL LIKE A DEAD RAT!” she yelled back. 


“Here” Kageyama used magic!? “Wha-!?” Hinata was shocked at what

Kageyama just did “Is that good enough?” “But- HOW!?” 

Kageyama looked at her with a cold eye looking towards her.

“Okay- uhh.. I guess this is good enough” Hinata added with a

scared face. 


After that they started walking and went to their first

destination..The dark cave in the Cryptic Forest. 


Walking deep in the forest is quite scary and terrifying. While

walking they saw a big golden shiny deer, it was really unusual

for Hinata and all, but for Kageyama, it's like he has seen these

unusual mammals before! “Keep walking..Don’t make any weird

noises” He said

“Okay??” Hinata replied. 


They keep walking and find so many cool animals Hinata has never

seen before!


“There it is” Kageyama said in a quiet voice “The what?” Hinata

replied also in a quiet voice “The cave of the Cryptic forest”

Kageyama replied “Come on let's go inside” Kageyama added “Okay..”

Hinata replied. 


They carefully went inside as Kageyama lit up the blue fire

torched “It's blue..” Said Hinata “Yes it is”Kageyama replied. 


“Now don’t talk and give me the map,” Kageyama added. The cave

started to get darker and darker and the light was becoming

weaker and weaker. 


Hinata went into the bag and tried to get the match to light up

the torch again but Kageyama stopped her.


 “No, don't,” Kageyama said whispering. “But why? The light is

gonna die soon” Hinata replied “Don’t worry it’s not, the light

is still strong..” “It’s not gonna die” Kageyama added “huh? of

course it’s not gonna die, It’s not a human being for it to die”

Kageyama replied “sheesh!” Hinata mumbled.


 “But the light is coming off” Hinata said “Don’t worry...It’s not

gonna come off that easily..” Kageyama said “It has been only 10

minnutes since we came in here” he added “EHHH!?” Hinata shouted

with shook. “SHHHHHHH!” kageyama yelled quietly “W-why” Hinata

answered quietly “It’s here” Said Kageyama “W-who!?” Hinata asked. 


Kegayama covered her mouth so that she couldn’t talk and the thing

that was walking around that might be dangerous wouldn’t hear them. 


“Don’t talk, I’ll take my hand off your mouth” Whispered Kageyama.

Hinata pulled a thumbs up and covered her mouth with her two hands,

they both waited there for at least 5 minutes. 


“What was that” Hinata whispered “Glist vampires” Kageyama replied.

“They guard the Cryptic Forest gems and the cave itself,” he added. 


“So why are they guarding the gem?” Hinata asked as they started

to walk again moving towards where they were heading. 


“Well it’s kinda complicated to explain but I guess I can tell you

why” Kageyama replied.


“Well a long time ago in this forest, humans and the Cryptic

vampires used to live together peacefully, but one day some greedy,

selfish group of humans tried to sneak into the queen's of

vampires castle and saw the cryptic gems. He tried to steal it but

the guards found him and sentenced him to death.


The queen got really angry at the humans for trying to steal the

gems.Those gems were special to the vampires but no one really

knows why. And because of that, humans and Vampires started to

declare a war, But none of them included the children's to the

fight. 


The human’s made their children's run away from the place so they

wouldn’t be involved and so did the Vampires. 


But centuries past, Vampires started to fade away from the

memories of humans and they started to become a myth to people.”

Kageyama explained.


“Woah!” Hinata was impressed how Kageyama knew that story. “Where

did you find that info?” Hinata asked. 


Kageyama Ignored her and said “We’re here” “OH!” said Hinata. 


The Place was all frozen and made out of ice, It was kinda cold

as they got deeper inside it.


”Brrrr- It’s freezing in here!” Said Hinata “Shhh! Don’t talk

too loud! The place might crash” Said Kageyama “Remember this is

an ice cave inside The cryptic Cave” He added. “Ohhh! Okay, this

is just so cool! Said Hinata. 


“There it is..The cryptic Flower gem” Said Kageyama “Flower gem-

WAIT WHAT!?-” Hinata shouted. “SHHHHH!! I told you to be quiet!”

said Kageyama and did a facepalm. “Whoops- sorry...” Hinata

whispered. 


“Come on let’s continue. Take out the stuff the book said we need

to use to take out the flower properly” Said Kageyama.


 “Ohh okay, I’m just gonna take the book out and I’ll give you the

items” Said Hinata.


“No, you’ll be the one who has to take the flower out with its

root” Said Kageyama. “But you’re the one who knows how to take it

out properly,” Hinata replied. “No..” said Kageyama “why?” Hinata

asked “I- I don’t know how to..” He replied “OH HAHAHAHA! Why

didn’t you say so!” Hinata burst out laughing, trying to hold it. 


But on the other hand Kageyama was so embarrassed by it so he

blushed so hard and he looked like a bright red Tomato and It

made Hinata laugh more.


“I- I CAN’T BREATH! *GASP* HAHAHAHAHA!!” Said Hinata while trying

to gasp for air. “S-Stop!” Said Kageyama embarrassingly. “OKay

Okay! Give me the items and I’ll dig it out for you...since you

don’t know how to.” Hinata was still laughing while trying to dig

out the flower off the ground.


“Wha- WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY!?” Kageyama shouted.

“N-Nothing!” Said Hinata. “Oh I thought we’re not supposed to be

loud- So then why are you shouting?” Hinata added. “Because you're

annoying!” Replied Kageyama. “Ouch! That hurted my feelings” Said

Hinata “Oh just shut up and keep digging up the flower!” Said

Kageyama “Said the one who can’t” Hinata mumbled “You know what!

I will just wait outside!” Said Kageyama angrily. 


Kageyama walked out of the Frozen cave and waited there for at

least 5 minutes. But things started to get suspicious after a

couple more minutes. Normally those 5 minutes just passed, Hinata

was talking to him and teasing him while he was outside since the

entrance was only nearby. 


But after 10 more minutes passed, it became quieter than usual and

it was all really weird, so he decided to check on Hinata but only

to find her gone! And that’s when He realized what he had been

feeling like there was following them wasn’t all just imagination

but all real. He tried looking for clues on who might have

kidnapped Hinata.


Kageyama’s POV “I shouldn’t have left her there. I knew this would

happen but I just forgot about it and kept moving on without even

thinking on what might happen to bring a human to this kind of

journey..”


He kept trying to find clues on who kidnapped Hinata and where did

they bring her. But Hinata on the other hand. 


Hinata’s POV “Ughh..Why is it so dark? And why does my head hurt

so bad, it’s like I have been Smacked in the head real hard”


“Because you were!” Said by an unknown voice.

“HUH!? HELLO?? IS ANYONE THERE!?” Hinata shouted. 

“Yes indeed my dear” another voice replied but a guy this time.

“W-WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!?” Shouted Hinata in a scared voice. “AND

WHY AM I TIED UP!?” She added.

“Ohh sweety, Don’t worry we won't hurt you! *Laughs evilly*”

“How can I be so sure about that! I don’t even know you people

so why would I trust you!” Said Hinata.


“Ohh this girl is feisty! I like her” Other guy’s voice said.
“Oh Welcome back Oikawa!” Said By the unknown girl.

“Well I am back, so what did I miss?” Oikawa asked.

“Well we just found this girl here trying to dig out the flower

of the Frozen cave!” Said by the unknown guy.

“Oh!” Said Oikawa.

“WHAT DO YOU GUYS WANT FROM ME!?!” Hinata shouted.

“Oh dear we don’t want anything from you! We just need you to do

one thing for us and you can be free and live a normal life again

after that!” Answered by the unknown girl.

“And that is??” Hinata asked.

“Well it’s simple. First you gotta make that boyfriend of yours to

come and save you here and then make him go to the room where you

will say where the book is” Said by the unknown girl.

“Well what if I don’t want to?” Hinata asked with confidence.

“Then both of you will die here! That easy!” Said by the other guy.

“Well it looks like it’s time for us to go!” Said the unknown girl.

“Oh and If you're wondering My name is Yuikio and my twin sister’s

name is Rin” Said Yuikio.

“Uhh okay..” Replied Hinata.

“What’s yours sweety?” Said Rin.

“Hinata…” Hinata Replied.

“Well then talk to you later!!” Said Yuikio.

“Tah tah~” Added Rin.


They all started to walk away from the place where Hinata was on,

and on their way towards the place they’re heading Yukio noticed

something strange about Hinata.


“Hey do you think she’s not a human?” He asked.

“Huh? What do you mean?” Rin asked.
“Oh nothing! Never mind!” Replied Yuikio.

“I swear if that girl is not a human being we’re screwed…” He

thought.


With Kageyama- “I shouldn’t just stand here” He thought “923,

turn on the location map” Kageyama Ordered.

“Right away!” The robot replied. 


The robot was made by Kageyama himself. He made this for important

purposes and for emergencies, just like what’s happening right

now. He never told anything Hinata about this, nor how he did the

fast change and the magical things he just did before. 


But besides that, Kageyama remembered he put a tracking device at

Hinata just in case something happened or they would get

separated from each other since the cave is big and the whole

place was pitch black, you can barely see anything unless you

have the blue colored torch. 

 

Just like what a normal person would do, They would open the

tracking device on and search their location and come up with a

plan on how they're gonna save the person they're trying to track. 


“923, track number 27” Kageyama ordered.

“Right on it!” The robot replied.

“3:45 Pm, Colrix mountain, south forest, abandon science lab.”

Robot added.

“Alright, thank you. Download that location through my watch and

I’ll be counting on you controlling the vehicle” Said Kageyama.

“Right on it!” Said Robot.


Kageyama went and hopped on his vehicle and went towards the

location that was shown and while he was on flight he came up

with a plan on how he can save Hinata, but there was a little

problem. He owes an explanation to Hinata after saving her because

she deserves to know everything.


“923, show me the building.” Kageyama Ordered.

“Right on it!” Robot replied.


Robot showed Kageyama the whole structure of the building.


“Woah...I didn’t think it would be this massive!” Said Kageyama.

“Well it is an abandoned science lab, of course it would be big”

Robot replied. 

“Oh shush, I know! I just didn’t realize it would be this huge!”

Kageyama replied with an annoyed face. 

“Are you angry master?” Robot asked.

“As you can tell, I am not.” Kageyama replied annoyed.


They have been on flight trying to find Hinata but it's been days

since she was kidnapped, But they just can’t find out why the

tracker hasn’t been moving. They were stuck in this one unfamiliar

place and it was all foggy! You can barely see anything!


They got out of the vehicle and started to walk instead. Just like

what they were doing, Robot 923 and Kageyama were following the

tracker to find Hinata and the villains who kidnapped her.


“I think this is the building…” Whispered Kageyama.

“Yes..According to the tracker, this is the location it is

locating to..” Robot 923 replied.


They went inside the building and that’s when they saw- 



That's all for my blog today hope you enjoyed reading it!

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